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Create Captivating Characters – How to Heart-Hook Your Reader

Create Captivating Characters. This is what all writers want to do. No doubt about it. The doubt arrives when we come to the How. How do we Create Captivating Characters to inhabit our stories? How do you make them inhabit your story?

Success for the storyteller is all about the characters you create. I’ve said that already in my last post, “Tell Strong Stories – How To Write a Great Main Character.” This is especially true for the storyteller of commercial fiction. The writer who must attract readers in large numbers.

We must Create Captivating Characters who possess the storytelling power to enthrall those readers. These characters captivate because our readers care about what happens to them. Before we explore how, specifically, to make that caring occur, let’s pin down your basics.

If you’re working on a novel now, where are you in that process? Are you at the beginning? If not, let’s imagine you are – either at the beginning or near it. Let’s put Beginner’s Mind to work for us and start from scratch as we explore how to Create Captivating Characters.

First of all, do you have a single, specific Main Character? Most successful stories have one main character. A first among equals who gives the story focus. Reader interest and agent-editor interest are best captured by a single, strong protagonist.

Have you named your single, strong protagonist? Give your main character a name up front, when you begin creating the story. Naming gives characters substance and reality, especially in your own consciousness as their creator. Even though that character name may change later.

If you are not working on a novel now, choose a character from someone else’s story. Use that character for the exercise to come in this post. Feel free to change that character from the original author’s version. My personal choice would be Scout Finch, daughter of Atticus, in To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee.

Why is a strong main character so important? Because when we read about his joys, his hopes and dreams. When we witness his admirable qualities in practice, or sometimes the qualities we less readily relate to, as with Jay Gatsby in The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald, we recognize that this character has something important to lose.

We don’t want this strong main character to lose this important thing. The strength of his portrayal has invaded our imaginations. We identify with him as the valiant person we wish to be. We identify with what happens to him. We’ve been hooked in the heart because we care.

The more we care what happens to your character, the more solidly your story hook is set in us. You are succeeding most spectacularly as a storyteller when you create a character whom we will care about not just a little, but intensely. The way we care about, even weep for, Celie in The Color Purple by Alice Walker.

Make us care about your character, then make us care even more. Start by answering this question for your main character, or the character you are working with today. What, specifically rather than in general, makes us care about this character as she is currently portrayed?

Now, what can you add to that portrayal to make us care even more about her? You have created a character we already care about. We are emotionally tied to her fate. We hope for only good things to happen to her. To make us care even more, you must frustrate our hopes for her.

You must make bad things happen to this character we are growing to love. Circumstances must block her from what she needs. Circumstances that are scary for her must arise. Physically scary and emotionally scary obstacles must explode onto her path.

In other words, you must put your main character into Trouble and Danger. You must make her fate uncertain, preferably perilous. Put her on a roller coaster ride. Most crucial to your success as a storyteller, put us, as your readers, on this thrill ride with her.

Plunge your main character into hot water, then turn up the heat. You have made bad things happen to her, now you must make those bad things worse. Mercy is inappropriate here, no matter how much you have come to love her, as have the rest of us, your readers.

Intense, dramatic, powerful events make your character intense, dramatic and powerful. Trouble and Danger are intense, dramatic and powerful, especially when they inflict themselves upon someone you have made us care about – a lot.

This is the How – How to Create Captivating Characters. Intense, dramatic, powerful characters are Captivating Characters. They captivate us because we can’t take our eyes off them. We can’t take our hearts off them either. We care too much for that to be possible.

Create Captivating Characters and you will have us hooked. We will be hooked by your characters and by you as their author. We will prove how captivated we are by – drum roll please – buying your next book. And, that is something else all writers want. No doubt about it.  Alice Orr – https://www.aliceorrbooks.com

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A Time of Fear & LovingAmanda Miller Bryce is a captivating character. Find out why in Alice’s novel A Time of Fear & Loving – Riverton Road Romantic Suspense Book 5. Meet Amanda HERE. You can find all of Alice’s books HERE.

What readers are saying about A Time of Fear & Loving. “I never want an Alice Orr book to end.” “Alice Orr is the queen of ramped-up stakes and page-turning suspense.” “Warning. Don’t read before bed. You won’t want to sleep.” “The tension in this novel is through the roof.”
“A budding romance that sizzles in the background until it ignites with passion.”
“The best one yet, Alice!”

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Amanda Rescued My Writing Career – Here’s How

Amanda Rescued My Writing Career, but before that was necessary, I would wake up in the morning with an itch to get back to whatever story I was working on at the time. I carried my writing notebook with me everywhere. I even took longer subway routes so I would have more scribbling opportunities between stops. Then, I put my writing notebook aside and hardly remembered where it was.

Before Amanda rescued my writing career, I was despondent. One of my very best friends, my devotion to telling stories, was losing her life right in front of me and I had no idea what to do to save her. Thank heaven I did have enough mind presence left to realize I needed help from an expert and got in touch with a motivational coach. Maybe a professional mojo locator could relocate mine.

To tell you the whole truth, I didn’t really believe it would work. I figured she’d assign me some intriguing creativity exercises. I would complete the exercises, because I’ve always been the kind of student who does the assignment. But, in the end, my motivation to write would continue to be disappeared.

Then we sat down to talk and her first question was this, “Would you mind telling me about your heroine?”

My response was to stare, probably slack-jawed. In the interests of full disclosure yet again, I must admit to you that I had barely thought about Amanda in weeks. FYI – Amanda is the main character of A Time of Fear & Loving – Riverton Road Romantic Suspense Book 5.

Amanda is a widow,” I began, because I needed to say something. Then, I caught myself. I had to qualify that statement. “But she’s tired of being thought of as a widow. She’s ready to come back to life.”

“What kind of life does she want to have now?” Ms. Motivator asked.

I hesitated for a moment before it hit me. I knew the answer to that question as well as I know my own name.

“It’s what she doesn’t want that matters most to her. She doesn’t want to be taken for granted as the always-dependable Miller sister any longer. She wants to break out and become somebody even she doesn’t expect herself to be.”

FYI once more – Amanda’s family owns Miller’s Inn in Riverton NY, and she has two sisters, Bethany and Patrice. We’ve already heard Bethany’s story in Riverton Road Romantic Suspense Book 3 – A Vacancy at the Inn.

I didn’t hesitate again. Detail after detail tumbled out of me, including some I hadn’t previously imagined. There were murders, even a possible kidnapping. I write Romantic Suspense after all. There was Amanda, of course, and Mike and Willow and Justin and the entire Book 5 gang. Every one of them had returned to life demanding that their story must be told.

Meanwhile, most magically, my love of writing had returned with them, and that is how Amanda Rescued My Writing Career.

A Time of Fear & Loving

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Things with Wings. The Detail that Makes Your Writing Fly. #MFRWAuthor #IAN1

Grabbing a reader’s attention is all about hooking her emotionally. Prying beneath the surface as she scurries along from sentence to sentence and page to page. Hitting her where she truly lives – in her heart.

We do that first and foremost by creating a main character about whom the reader not only cares but cares very much. So much so that she begins to behave as if this character were a real-life human being.

Red Jeep 1The reader roots for your character to succeed and dreads that she may not. When such rooting and dreading happens your reader is engaged on an emotional level with your story and that engagement keeps her eagerly turning pages all the way to The End.

Meanwhile, beyond this deftly drawn main character, lies another engaging element of great storytelling. An element that compels your reader to stop short for an instant in her pell-mell plunge through your plot to be hooked yet again by the Deeply Felt Detail.

This detail draws your reader to a particular moment in your story and holds her there to experience a flash of connection. She recognizes the essence of what you have written. She responds at an emotional level even if she doesn’t consciously understand why.

You’ve caught your reader on the hook of your deeply felt detail. But first you must experience that detail even more deeply yourself. Where do you find such resonance – moments, sights, objects, whatever they may be? You find them among your own deeply felt attachments.

For example, I feel such attachment to my red Jeep Wrangler. When I think about that vehicle my heart flies to a fond place, soft and warm and sentimental. Or it can fly more frantically to a place of terror. The difference depends on the circumstances of the scene.

Fond and tender if that scene is of my grandchildren filling the backseat with cookie crumbs and squabbling between bites. Frantic and fearful if that scene involves a wrong turn of the steering wheel that could send us hurtling to disaster.

I drive my red Wrangler onto the page and make my story fly straight into my reader’s psyche and most especially into her heart. I do that by revving my writer engine to the max on every drop of drama fuel this detail holds for me personally. I give it storytelling wings.

I possess a lifetime’s worth of emotionally potent details – moments, sights, objects, whatever they may be. You do also. Think back. Feel deeply. Engage your heart and your nerve endings in the search. Make a list. Then use those details in your writing and watch your stories soar.

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