Comments on: Strong Relationships Blaze Your Story Pages /strong-relationships-blaze-your-story-pages/ Thrilling Suspense. Sizzling Romance. Mon, 24 Oct 2022 19:14:41 +0000 hourly 1 By: aliceorrbooks@gmail.com /strong-relationships-blaze-your-story-pages/#comment-9577 Sat, 11 Jun 2022 15:20:16 +0000 /?p=2654#comment-9577 In reply to Kayelle Allen.

Dear Kayelle. You said it all, or certainly the heart of the matter. “If a person is passionate about something, hurt by something, or in love with someone, that triggers all the rest of the story.” Yes. it does!!! So many authors struggle, what they despair is in vain, to find their story. Yet, there it is, in that trigger place you so accurately thumbnail precisely for us. In the character’s passion, their hurt, their love — and in the obstacles to those intense emotions as those obstacles occur in their relationships in the story. The relationships are the key to what you rightly describe as the “emotional drama” of the story. All the other stuff – the plot points, the firework encounters, the traumatic events – though they are also crucial to storytelling, actually find their groundswell of story power in the emotional drama of the relationships the author creates. Without those super bright internal fireworks, the external rest is only what I think of as hardware. The software that makes the hardware work dwells in the soft center of emotional encounters, emotional relationships, emotional stories. Amen to that. And blessings upon you, always blessings. Alice

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By: Kayelle Allen /strong-relationships-blaze-your-story-pages/#comment-9572 Thu, 09 Jun 2022 04:28:20 +0000 /?p=2654#comment-9572 It’s the emotional drama that gets me invested in a story, and reviews of my books often mention emotions. I agree it’s the lynchpin that everything else turns on. The goal, motivation, and conflict are generated by the emotions that drive the characters. If a person is passionate about something, hurt by something, or in love with someone, that triggers all the rest of the story. I think you’re spot on about the drama arising from “feels.”

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